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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 3:57 pm    Post subject: poem Reply with quote

i used to write a lot but lately i havent really been inspired until i was watchin it rain in class today and all i could think about was skatin, so i decided id pass the time with a little poem i wrote, lemme know what you think

the rope pulls tight, the board rolls over
the sun falls soft upon your shoulders
the water glides smooth beneath your feet
your pulse falls in sync to nature's beat

the life on land seems far away
work, problems, and bills are gone today
every move you make becomes a piece of your art
each carve a brushstroke from the image in your heart

you leave your tiny mark on something far greater
loving every minute of being a wakeskater

amen

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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

very nice. if i every get around to making another board, maybe we can put this on the bottom. With the amen at the end it seems like the boondock saints prayer, which should be followed by gunshots.. in this case i guess it should be followed buy the sound a board makes on an acid drop..
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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 4:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i concur, we shoulda put it on the top of the gator under the clear tape
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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I was thinking that, but there are too many questions with the gator right now. 1. if im sending it back for a non cracked one 2. what happens when i switch to some jessup.. if i keep it, maybe we can do it on a place where i can have a cut out of tape and it can show through.. write small.. lol
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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol ur the artist
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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

a wakeskate haiku;

start up roller boots
hear and feel the surroundings
feelin good, real good


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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 9:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like the part about the water under your feet n sync w/ natures beat


that is what's up Cool sweet poem bradda.

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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 10:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks bro
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PostPosted: Jun 07, 2010 11:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

jachandl, sick writing skills. u got a gift
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PostPosted: Jun 08, 2010 7:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

the next jim morrison...haha im playing but that was very inspiring !!
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PostPosted: Jun 08, 2010 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ya i wish i could put it to better use tho, i only seem to want to write things when it doesnt matter lol, thanks for the support tho
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