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jachandl Faceplant

Joined: 16 Jan 2010 Posts: 43 City: Tampa
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 3:57 pm Post subject: poem |
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i used to write a lot but lately i havent really been inspired until i was watchin it rain in class today and all i could think about was skatin, so i decided id pass the time with a little poem i wrote, lemme know what you think
the rope pulls tight, the board rolls over
the sun falls soft upon your shoulders
the water glides smooth beneath your feet
your pulse falls in sync to nature's beat
the life on land seems far away
work, problems, and bills are gone today
every move you make becomes a piece of your art
each carve a brushstroke from the image in your heart
you leave your tiny mark on something far greater
loving every minute of being a wakeskater
amen _________________ dont worry about today because no matter what the tide is still gonna change in the mornin |
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rc005 Faceplant

Joined: 20 Jan 2010 Posts: 27
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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| very nice. if i every get around to making another board, maybe we can put this on the bottom. With the amen at the end it seems like the boondock saints prayer, which should be followed by gunshots.. in this case i guess it should be followed buy the sound a board makes on an acid drop.. |
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jachandl Faceplant

Joined: 16 Jan 2010 Posts: 43 City: Tampa
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 4:17 pm Post subject: |
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i concur, we shoulda put it on the top of the gator under the clear tape _________________ dont worry about today because no matter what the tide is still gonna change in the mornin |
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rc005 Faceplant

Joined: 20 Jan 2010 Posts: 27
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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| I was thinking that, but there are too many questions with the gator right now. 1. if im sending it back for a non cracked one 2. what happens when i switch to some jessup.. if i keep it, maybe we can do it on a place where i can have a cut out of tape and it can show through.. write small.. lol |
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jachandl Faceplant

Joined: 16 Jan 2010 Posts: 43 City: Tampa
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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lol ur the artist _________________ dont worry about today because no matter what the tide is still gonna change in the mornin |
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stompin9s Backside 180


Joined: 12 Nov 2003 Posts: 2385 City: Vail - CO
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 4:43 pm Post subject: |
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a wakeskate haiku;
start up roller boots
hear and feel the surroundings
feelin good, real good
 _________________ "it is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation." |
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Raven 3 Shuv Reed Texas Gap

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Posts: 5988 City: OC
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 9:47 pm Post subject: |
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i like the part about the water under your feet n sync w/ natures beat
that is what's up sweet poem bradda. _________________ dbanana wrote:
May you have friends,boards,beer,and glassy water forever. Cassette4life |
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jachandl Faceplant

Joined: 16 Jan 2010 Posts: 43 City: Tampa
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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thanks bro _________________ dont worry about today because no matter what the tide is still gonna change in the mornin |
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crispy Backside 180

Joined: 21 Jul 2007 Posts: 1372 City: Roc City
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Posted: Jun 07, 2010 11:42 pm Post subject: |
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| jachandl, sick writing skills. u got a gift |
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-LoGiK- Kickflip


Joined: 22 Sep 2005 Posts: 2747 City: Orlando
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jachandl Faceplant

Joined: 16 Jan 2010 Posts: 43 City: Tampa
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Posted: Jun 08, 2010 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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ya i wish i could put it to better use tho, i only seem to want to write things when it doesnt matter lol, thanks for the support tho _________________ dont worry about today because no matter what the tide is still gonna change in the mornin |
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