Need your critique for this video

Chad H · Posted: Apr 02, 2009 3:08 pm Post subject: Need your critique for this video

I just made this slight intro to put on all my videos for the year because I finally have enough random footage for it. What do you guys think?

Should I lose the wire things? Or maybe just move the videos so the wires aren't in the middle of them?

http://vimeo.com/3977174

Guy · Backside 180 Joined: 14 Jul 2006 Posts: 842 City: Orillia

I think the camera is a little shaky in some parts to really get a feel for the upcoming video part.. if you know what i mean.

I would get rid of the wire things.

IMO

Chad H · Posted: Apr 02, 2009 4:12 pm Post subject:

Here is another version i just tossed together where i moved the video out of the way of the wire in some of the bad parts...
http://vimeo.com/3978298/

Gnarly Dancer 42 · 360 flip Joined: 21 May 2007 Posts: 5121 City: kalamazoo

ha yeah i'd say loose the crazy lines, i think it would look cool if it was over black and was used for a title or something, but when its over video i think it looks sort of un necessary

nice footage though

kyle · Posted: Apr 02, 2009 5:29 pm Post subject:

Chad H, DRUMMMMMMMMMMMA